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vor 13 JahrenLetzte Aktivität: vor 10 Jahren

Hello Mark,
I am going to play tennis in the afternoon. Would you like to go with me. On the radio they talking about the weather now. It is going to be nice afternoon and the wind is very weak today. I think play tennis with you will be great fun for both sides me and you and our friends will have a lot of fun if they decided to go with us.
If possible write me at once what do you think about it? By the way,Have you seen my balls anywhere? I do not know where they are. I hope that it is very good idea to play tennis in such a beautiful day and all that counts is friendship and good fun. I am waiting for your response.......

artbud

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Stimmen

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świetnie piszesz, ciekawy tekst, nie boisz się używać trudniejszych zwrotów - tak trzymać

they talking => they were talking
the weather now => current weather
I think play => I think playing
both sides me and you => both: me and you

podoba mi się fragment
Have you seen my balls...
można zrozumieć dwuznacznie ;)

Bilberry

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vor 13 Jahren

artbud - Thank you for your help. - vor 13 Jahren geändert: vor 10 Jahren

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> On the radio they talking about the weather now.

On the radio they are now talking about the weather lub
On the radio they were talking about the weather.

TopMan

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vor 13 Jahrengeändert: vor 13 Jahren

artbud - Thanks - have a nice day. - vor 13 Jahren geändert: vor 10 Jahren

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Zamiast "On the radio they talking about the weather now" proponuję: On the radio they are talking about the current weather.

dorotapietrak

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vor 13 Jahren

artbud - Hello,Dorota,nice to meet you! - vor 13 Jahren

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